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 PROOFREADING PAGE FIRST PROOFREADER--ADD FIVE SIMILES USING LIKE OR AS AND COMPARE TWO THINGS IN ORDER TO MAKE DESCRIPTION MORE VIVID. SECOND PROOFREADER -- ADD FIVE COLOR ADJECTIVES, SCATTER THROUGH THE STORY. THIRD PROOFREADER -- ADD FIVE ADVERBS, SCATTER THROUGH THE STORY. FOURTH PROOFREADER -- CHECK PARAGRAPHING FIFTH PROOFREADER --CHECK SPELLING AND CAPITALIZATION SIXTH PROOFREADER -- READ WHOLE STORY AND IMPROVE IT.